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Martinho II
05/01/2012, 9:08 PM
http://theleagueofirelandblog.blogspot.com/

read on to see who it is!

Longfordian
05/01/2012, 10:09 PM
I saw that, nice to have him give his opinions. But, and I know the intentions are good, there's an annoying amount of spelling and grammatical mistakes on the blog. It just undermines all the good work and in fairness is a pretty basic thing for anyone with journalistic ambitions.

Acornvilla
05/01/2012, 11:32 PM
Well his writing style will develop over time, its just a case of practice. He should sit back and looking at what hes written before you publish it, see how she flows. I think that would be the most important improvement he could make. If you sit back and look at it, as if it were someone else's' work, you will pick out mistakes and see areas where you can make the language flow a little better.

Anyway its a damn sight better than nothing, My advice is don't rush publishing things, keep re reading!

outspoken
06/01/2012, 9:40 AM
Hi lads thanks for the plug, I'm happy to take on all comments as it can only improve us. I'm not really looking for a career in it to be honest it's really more a way of keeping up to date with the league and giving it another of few outlets. Thanks to Paul Hunt for agreeing to write a weekly column with us he's a top bloke. You may also be interested to see Neale Fenn's weekly piece along with 2 more columnists to be made known today.

outspoken
16/01/2012, 4:46 PM
Alright lads anyone thats interested im on shannonside tonight between 8-9pm talking LOI and LTFC will make sure to try and give us a bright outlook get a few sunshinners out haha